It is thought that there is generation gap between two generations, but in fact, there is no such thing. Compared with the young generation, the old are more calm and experienced. But the young are full with energy and braver than the old. And they are the same when the old are young with the young. Even two can’t come up with each other; the most reason is their personal character works, but not the age different. So, age really doesn’t matter in people’s relationship.
I hold the point that age doesn’t matter in people’s relationship.
this is a good topic and you have a good point, but it would be better if your thesis was a little bit shorter. So consider shortening it.
ReplyDeleteI like you topic. If you use complex centance instead of simple sentances, that would be great.
ReplyDeleteIt's a good topic but the statement it's to long and you have a lot of ideas here.
ReplyDeleteYour classmates are all right - you need to condense this into one or two sentences and you should try to use complex sentences like Liu suggests. Your stance is very strong and that is good, but you need to incorporate the other elements into one or 2 sentences.
ReplyDeleteEven though most of us think that there is generation gap between people in different age, and it matters a lot, but through these facts and analysis, i can determind to say that there is no generation gap and it does no matter to people's realationship
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