Monday, October 12, 2009

Thesis statement

Question: Should HIV infected mother’s be allowed to breastfeed as a form of postnatal care?

Answer: HIV infected mothers should not be allowed to breastfeed as it poses a risk of infection to the infant.

Because breast feeding can be a medium of transfer of the HIV virus, a causative agent of AIDS, from the mother to the child, it poses a risk to the child’s health and should be avoided.

2 comments:

  1. The thesis statement shows his views,but I think you thesis statement maybe can add more thing to support you idea.

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  2. This looks good! I would not add more to it at this point.

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