Does emotion have an effect on physical health?
Although many people consider that emotion and physical health are separate, emotion has an effect on physical health. Positive emotion like being optimistic can promote the well being of living and live longer while negative emotion such as depression and stress can lead to illness, even death.
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I think that your thesis statement is eye-catching and the main idea is very interesting and very true.
ReplyDeleteThe only thing i would change is the grammar in the thesis statement,I would write it as : Do emotions have an effect on ones physical health.
Despite the second sentence is too long to understand, but this statement is clear about the topic.
ReplyDeleteExcellent job! I think your thesis statement looks very good.
ReplyDeleterevised thesis statement
ReplyDeleteDo emotions have effects on physical health?
Although many people consider that emotion and physical health are separate, emotion has an effect on physical health. Positive emotion like being optimistic can promote the well being of living and live longer while negative emotion such as depression and stress can lead to illness, even death.