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Very clear statement.
It will be better if you specified your idea. For instance, how long they should be in prison or how much money they should pay.
Good!
Yan, yours is one of a few that is actually too short! This is a good start, but you should try to be more specific like Shunya suggests.
Very clear statement.
ReplyDeleteIt will be better if you specified your idea. For instance, how long they should be in prison or how much money they should pay.
ReplyDeleteGood!
ReplyDeleteYan, yours is one of a few that is actually too short! This is a good start, but you should try to be more specific like Shunya suggests.
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