Assignment2

First,both a plague of tics and my inner shrimp are humous narrative essays. However,from my point of view,compared with a plague of tics,I consider that my inner shrimp is much better composed. My reason is as follows.
first ,the most important reason is that my inner shrimp has some more details and a good structue. In the first pragraph,Garry first expressed his harrow since he was a midget. Then from the second pragraph to the nine pragraph,he told us an experience when he found a house. Then from then tenth pragraph to the thirteenth pargraph ,he described the process he experienced in order to fade away the scorn from others. At last,he just stated what he thought from his experience.
In the second part,he described when he looked down on the receptionist,he determined to become tall. Then in the third part,he really did a good description about what he had done. He hang from door frames,slept on the back ,did assorted floor exercises(from the tenth pargraph of my inner shrimp). And then ,at least,he told us that the way to fade away scorn from others. As a matter of fact,I really believe that his description of details is better than a plague of tics. From his essay ,we also could get some truth about life and attitude when you face some difficulties.