People received almost 3000 advertisement every day, but when people using their precious saving to do the purchase, a lot of people make their own decisions in spite of what advertisement says. Based on this situation, is it necessary that companies spent millions of dollars on advertisement? What they devote worth the revenue they get from it or not?
Supporting one side: weather advertisement give people a good or bad effect, adv do interferes people’s decisions when they spent their money.
This one is good,but you don't need so many sentence.One or two sentence should be better.
ReplyDeleteA little bit much senctences you include, i guess 2 is better.
ReplyDeleteThe topic is good,
ReplyDeleteThis topic is very interesting but I think you should write your side.You should state your main idea more strongly.
ReplyDeleteYour classmates all give you good advice. You should take out the statistics, or condense them to just a small part of your thesis. Then you need to take a strong stance on one side of this issue.
ReplyDeletePeople received many advertisement every day, but when people using their precious saving to do the purchase, a lot of people make their own decisions in spite of what advertisement says. My personal opinion is advertisement give people effect, adv do interferes people’s decisions when they spent their money.
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