Tuesday, October 13, 2009
thesis statement
As the unstoppable progress of technology, many people choose internet as the source of getting news, many medias choose internet as the platform to report news and internet itself has its own advangtages like convenience and rapidity. So it is predicatable that internent will replace other news reporting media such as television or newspapers.
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The statement is great,with all elements: the last sentence is conclusion,which gives your mian point,so I come to learn abou the your topic in the last sentence.Sentence above gives information with simply way ,that's good!
ReplyDeleteThis is an interesting thesis; however, it will not work for an argument essay because you are not taking a stance on the issue. You must state whether or not this something SHOULD occur - not just state a fact. For example, "students should not study a foreign language at a young age." Your topic is not one that someone can disagree with. If you take a stance for or against the internet taking over the other media, THEN it is an argument.
ReplyDeleteEven though internet has its own advantage of reporting news towards other mass media such as television, newspapers and radios, it's still not good thing for internet to replace them due to its unreliability of information and the erosion of culture.
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