Tuesday, October 13, 2009

Thesis Statement

Should or should not government make some political plans to control the new birth population?
As for most of the countries in the world, governments have political plans for controlling the population. For example, China has a family plan from 1950s and Indian government made a plan which is similar with Chinese plan to slow down the growing population. Also, in order to solve some social problems such as hunger, work and living problems. All in all, with the government political plans about controlling the population our society will become better and better.

3 comments:

  1. A thesis statement should be two sentences.
    You can start with a statement which supports the direction you are going in.
    For example begin with something stating the negative issues caused by over population to support your poinion. Then state your strong opinion on the issue.

    You have the correct information, it just needs to be put in the right format.

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  2. It is a good topic.in your topic,you just describe the two sides of the topic.and this topic i think is really a good topic that connect to the society.

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  3. The topic is excellent, but like Amy said, you need to condense the most important part into a short statement - one or two sentences. Your last sentence is good, and if you just use one other sentence or clause before it you will have a good thesis.

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