Should pre-school students be taught second language in Japan?
Japanese pre-school students should not be taught English as second language because their first language, Japanese, skills to speak have not developed yet and it can make them confused.
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Great, it is pretty easy to understand your thesis statement.
ReplyDeletePretty interesting point although i think let kids to learn a second language is much easier than a adult people or teenagers.
ReplyDeleteInteresting topic, but, I'm kind of can't understand what is your thesis statement, if i am remmber corect, we need at least 2 thesis topic to support your own answer.
ReplyDeleteThe thesis statement is good. You do not need 2 thesis topics to support your answer, so please ignore Daniel's suggestion. However, you have a grammatical mistake. You cannot insert an appositive "language, Japanese, skills" at this place in the sentence. In this phrase "language skills" functions together so you cannot insert a noun between the two words. Work on re-wording the last part.
ReplyDeleteYes, I was wrong, sorry about the bad suggestion.
ReplyDeleteShould pre-school students be taught second language in Japan?
ReplyDeleteJapanese pre-school students should not be taught English as second language because their first language skills to speak Japanese have not developed yet and it can make them confused.