Should animals have rights?
Hunman being have rights, but shuould animal have rights? Nowaday, so many animals are endangered. Many of them got killed by hunter because they have something that people want in part of their body. Despite many country have laws to protect endangered animals. With the changing of the climate, mare and more animals no longer in existence. We are going to loss these beautiful friends. If we loss them we counldn't have them back again. So what we can do is to give them rights, to protect them as much as we can.
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Thesis statement should be written in one or two sentences so yours is too long. And my suggestion is cutting down some backgroud information and reasons. On the other hand, the background you prensented shows that your topic is controversial. That is good.Just state in summary.Besides,the verb form of "loss" is lose.
ReplyDeleteI think that your topic is interesting, the only thing i think u should pay attention to is your grammar and spelling mistakes, especially in the body.
ReplyDeleteLiang, Pan & Teta present good points. You need to cut this down to about 2 sentences that show the direction of your essay. I would start with your part "With the changing of the climate..." and combine that with the following sentences into 2 sentences.
ReplyDeleteclimate changes lead certain animal species to the edge of extinction, it is about time for us to grant them rights for survival. considering how much humans are gonna lose if they continues ignoring such facts, it is very urgent for us to come up with rights for our animal friends.
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