Should the government change the current Chinese education system? The government should change the education system which includes the exam system, the method of teaching and the college system, because we should improve students' ability of creating to adapt the new medoern world.
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It is a very good thesis statement. However, there is a spelling mistake "modoern".
ReplyDeleteIt's a nice thesis statement but lack of statistic support in my opinion.
ReplyDeleteThe statement shows well what the author think about his argument. And, the reasons he gave by the topic are rich.
ReplyDeleteVery good start on a thesis statement. A few problems with grammar and punctuation. For instance, you should insert a comma between "teaching, and" Also, you need to say "to adapt to the modern world."
ReplyDeleteShould the government change the current Chinese education system? The government should change the education system which includes the exam system, the method of teaching， and the college system, because we should improve students' ability of creating to adapt to the new modern world.
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