Monday, October 12, 2009

Thesis statement (Tiantian)


Should people undergo plastic surgery?

In recent years, people in all ages prefer to pay more attention on their appearances, so they undergo plastic surgery to make their faces or bodies perfect. However, the disadvantages of plastic surgery, which included the risks of it, wasting a huge amount of money, ignoring their own unique personality and bad influences for children, are much more than the advantages.

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Should death penalty be ended in United States?

Death penalty should come to an end in the United States because it is against human rights and wastes money on killers instead of victims.

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Does emotion have an effect on physical health?

Although many people consider that emotion and physical health are separate, emotion has an effect on physical health. Positive emotion like being optimistic can promote the well being of living and live longer while negative emotion such as depression and stress can lead to illness, even death.

Should we still have discrimination in sports?

Because athletes with disabilities or AIDS/HIV or black people are equal with the rest of athletes, people should not support athletes being separated or discriminated.

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Question: Should HIV infected mother’s be allowed to breastfeed as a form of postnatal care?

Answer: HIV infected mothers should not be allowed to breastfeed as it poses a risk of infection to the infant.

Because breast feeding can be a medium of transfer of the HIV virus, a causative agent of AIDS, from the mother to the child, it poses a risk to the child’s health and should be avoided.

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Because the youth are so impressionable and can easily suffer psychological trauma due to body image issues, the fashion industry should ban the hiring of anorexic and underweight models.

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Is Reconciliation possible among the new generation in Rwanda after the 1994 genocide?

Reconciliation is possible if the new generation is educated about what happened and why it cannot happen again.

Because the genocide took place 15 years ago in Rwanda, the youth should encourage reconciliation and not let it happen again in order to build a successful country.